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Placement on the pavement does not matter to the lackluster lackadaisical lines being dropped or sucked through the nose into the brain game of epic proportional breakfast is the best meal of the daylight savings time for problems to begin again from the middle of nowhere is important to anyone have a dollar to buy some food stamps on the ground round town drown now all around athlete takes the gold showers of praise the Lord Almighty who reigns on high and dry as a bone-chilling horror story of my life liberty and pursuit of happiness is a lie

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    Drew Martyn almost 3 years ago

    This works well for me, another innovative drabble Mr S.

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    Brandon Sutton almost 3 years ago

    Thanks!

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    Rodindeadpan almost 3 years ago

    Awesome and I read it in one breath.

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    Brandon Sutton almost 3 years ago

    Thanks to you both!

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    Brandon Sutton almost 3 years ago

    Perhaps I should clarify the hidden meanings tag. What I really mean is that there is a deeper message being portrayed in the work than is clearly apparent. For example, Blue-Green had this same tag, but that was because blue-green is symbolic for depression. Sorry that I made that confusing. Still, thanks for the comment! I love to hear people take an interest in my work that much. In fact, that is one of the main reasons that drives me as a writer.

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