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Detective McDonald was observing the crime scene. The victim had been murdered brutally, and his face too mangled to recognize. McDonald was just walking home too, looking forward to some time off this weekend when this had to happen.

McDonald found some blood on the victim, which was possibly not his own but the killer's. He called for the CSI unit to investigate, but they didn't hear him. He reached out for an officer, but found his hand went straight through the man. Spooked, he looked down and noticed his watch was on the victim. Everything suddenly got very cold.

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    Frenchie over 5 years ago

    Did not expect the twist. Great :)

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    Brandon Sutton over 5 years ago

    Thank you!

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    Drew Martyn over 5 years ago

    Absolutely fantastic, I never saw that coming :) I loved the way you told us he was the dead man. Superb drabble.

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    Chris Walker over 5 years ago

    Nice :-)

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    Horrorshow over 5 years ago

    Yep, another success for you here, Brandon. Time to click once more on the vote button!

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    Brandon Sutton over 5 years ago

    Thanks, all of you!

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    John Moralee over 5 years ago

    Like the twist!

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    Brandon Sutton over 5 years ago

    Thank you!

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    Tony Spencer over 5 years ago

    This one is a classic

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