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July 1966, Mount Cheminis, Quebec:

The ashes of our newborn barely filled the palm of my hand. They were powdery soft to the touch, delicate, and when scattered to the breeze, they drifted as a tiny grey cloud, carrying with them the bittersweet, desperate yearnings for a life barely begun.

July 2016, Mount Pisgah, North Carolina:

I am old now, but still venture to the high country whenever I am able, for it is there that I am reminded of the eternity of Nature, the fragility of life, and that my child still floats, forever free, on the mountain wind.

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    VerityAlways over 2 years ago

    Sorry for your loss, my deepest sympathy goes out to you and your family

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    Neville Hunt over 2 years ago

    This is very moving, Alan, terribly sad. It must have been very difficult to write, and to share.

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    Alan Toney over 2 years ago

    I thank you both.

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    Christopher over 2 years ago

    Very touching, even more so knowing it's true.

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    Sarah Oakes over 2 years ago

    This is beautifully written.

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