The church was abandoned. I walked up to the creaky door with my friends. Walking through the halls, the bass became louder and the floor began shaking. We finally approached the living room full of a band set and crowd. The music was erupting through our eardrums as the band performed. The band began to invite the crowd on stage. As they arrived on stage, the guests begin to fall through the stage. They were all under the influence of drugs so getting them up on stage was easy. One by one the crowd disappeared, never to be seen again.
Mike Arnzen over 2 years ago
A very surreal story, Victoria! It seemed a little unfair that the setting shifted from a church to a living room to a stage -- but the hallucinatory framework allows you to do that kind of poetic "dance" with your imaginings, so... good work!
Brian Gralluzzo over 2 years ago
This is a really interesting story! You managed to fit so much action and information in so few words, and I wish there were more. Good job!