striked
Perfect Monday - escaped the rains, got the lift on time to the top floor and found a striking woman on the parallel elevator. My morning joy swiftly dissolves when the "excuse me's" push me to the end. I'm afraid i'll lose track of her.
Lucky though, the elevators ding through the 4th - she catches me, 7th - a smile tips her lips, 9th - smirk and knowing eyes, 15th - my elevator empties and I hold the doors open for her to cross.
She smiles and says "I'm here".
Lights go off. Forever.
Last night fun with ouija
"Myrtle Malone will you come?"
- Category: Horror, Chillers & Ghost Stories
8 comments add one below
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VerityAlways 11 months ago
Horror can be addictive.... Hope you'll are well and shall read yours soon.
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Neville Hunt 11 months ago
Still trying to understand, but will continue to do so...
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Richard Hunt 11 months ago
Like Neville, still trying to understand this!
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Jamie Clapperton 11 months ago
I Get an eerie sense of 'Is that really her' when the narrator is watching the woman from the elevator, even without knowing who she was. The amiguous ending is a bit scary. :-)
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VerityAlways 11 months ago
Sorry please excuse my poor writing - too many horror flicks and numbers have numbed my brain.
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VerityAlways 11 months ago
So protagonist was playing with ouija board last night and was joking about asking myrtle Malone (ghost) to meet. He didn’t know it was Malone in the opposite elevator - wish came true in death….
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Jamie Clapperton 11 months ago
Nothing to apologize about Verity . Ambiguity can be interesting! :-)
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Jamie Clapperton 11 months ago
Guess we were typing at the same time.
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