Flak-ed!

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

Apologies if you re-read it.
Accidently it got deleted when the screen froze- a cardiac arrest.

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

Since I already digested the older version and couldn't recollect the exact. I wrote this piece.
Would love to hear if this was still suspense or got flaked too soon!

Jamie Clapperton over 2 years ago

I've accidentally deleted things just after writing them
The coffee and croissants sound like a happy ending that can't come too soon. to me .

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

Thanks, Jamie!
Sorry! I couldn't get this right. The word meter has got my case this time ;-)

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

All I can think is this last, suits fine?

Off the oven, labelled me 'Croissants' at Viennoiserie.

Neville Hunt over 2 years ago

I have inadvertently deleted embryonic drabbles but have usually found that if I press the go back arrow, I get it back. I can’t help wondering whether all that exercise is good for one though Verity... controversial? maybe! but if croissants are the cure for exhausting oneself, then might there be some middle ground?

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

Thanks, Neville. I'll keep the back arrow in mind!

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

I can't seem to get this right...

Brief- It's an autobiography of flour (gluten) converted into a croissant (as per the 3-day Recipe), which I tried to put as a gruesome exercise.
The laps are the layers in the croissants, and the somersaults and curves are the crescent shape, the Sun's the oven.
Finally, it discovers that it's transformed as a _Croissant_ at the Cafe/Viennoiserie.

Neville Hunt over 2 years ago

Wow, well aren’t I a thicko! I must expect more cryptic constructions in your drabbles, Verity. It completely went over my head, but now you’ve pointed it out, it’s terrific! Very clever!

Shame on me!😕

Jamie Clapperton over 2 years ago

Now you've explained it I might dream of talking croissants tonight. ! ;-))

Christopher over 2 years ago

These always make me hungry!

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

Neville, such a shame I circled with words. It should have been a bit more revealing to know what dish it is. Probably, will update it later.

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

Jamie, dare I ask how was breakfast?!

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

Thanks, Christopher! The aim is to please (grow hungrier)!

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

Apologies for the late replies. Having a few rough weeks.

Christopher over 2 years ago

I hope everything is okay.

VerityAlways over 2 years ago

Yes, just a few deadlines. It will take me a while to get back on regular. Thanks!