The Day Pt. 1
It was 10th Octarian, The day the summons day.
Spending 35 $k out of the 50 $k, yet, I am bankrupt, bereft of possibilities. I’ll have to wait for KarmaK’s ruling in his court. I reached the Bermuda Circle and met the sailor. He ferried me across the GB River, which has three streams. They lead to different gates as per our fate. He rowed me through the middle stream to the foot of the Central Office eminent as ‘House of KarmaK’. The Ghost Eye, who eye scans the individual and confirms the credentials lead me to the grand lobby.
- Category: General / Misc
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VerityAlways over 2 years ago
If you could fictionally believe that our planets align and wishes come true at the sight of a falling star. Then this aurora of pursuit is a piece you could read.
What if your deeds are measured? Could we truly be in debt?
Well, board this journey to figure it out! -
VerityAlways over 2 years ago
This is a short story drabblified version.
A very feeble attempt. I'm game to all your comments!! -
Neville Hunt over 2 years ago
Intriguing, Verity! Please don’t do yourself down! It looks fun and I love the idea of the falling star wish fulfilment and your core premise.
An advertising boss of mine once said that if he ever heard me doing myself down again, he would fire me! I believed him and it changed my life. He never heard me undermining myself again.
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VerityAlways over 2 years ago
Thanks Neville, this idea was on a coffee break. I am afraid no more falling stars but someone else will lead the action.
I do remember your wise advise, Neville. That pushed me to this feat! -
Christopher over 2 years ago
An intriguing beginning.
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VerityAlways over 2 years ago
Thanks, Christopher!
I could manage only 16 drabbles, unlike yours and Neville's. I salute you'll for your determination and dedication.
If it's not an imposition and you have the time to read would love your feedback! -
Christopher over 2 years ago
I'll definitely finish it. I caught up with Neville's drabbles yesterday and I started on yours but ran out of time. I'll read more later today.
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VerityAlways over 2 years ago
Thank you! Grateful that you're reading the drabbles.
