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He's like a demo version of a man. With all these amazing features, but, once you decide to make a full circle, you get redirected. Not quite a limited edition, he's more of a sold-out, out of production shit. Pontiac Solstice. Drive it at your own risk. It's likely he will wear you out-not the other way around. Periodical, like happiness. Or more like lust he inspires. A fire going out, leaving an ember. He asks to blow your brain out, so that, once he comes back, happens so you forgot the feeling of being deprived his attention.

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    Jim M almost 10 years ago

    Reads like the poetry of a sped up dream- I'd love it if you could post a comment discussing where this came from and how you built it- the style is fantastic

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    Horrorshow almost 10 years ago

    Welcome to drablr.com, Glimmer. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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    Glimmer almost 10 years ago

    Thank you very much, guys! I never expected any feedback. I was getting bored in the lecture, so I wrote 'bout a boy I was in love with, Jim.

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    Horrorshow over 9 years ago

    Hope to see another drabble from you soon, Glimmer. :-)

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    Jim M over 9 years ago

    Hey Glimmer, hope to see more from you soon

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