Jake Randolph in "Requiem For A Stripper" Pt. 217
I snuck as quietly as I could behind him and as he opened the door and went through I grabbed it just before it shut. I opened it slightly to make sure no one was looking and stepped in. It looked like a storage room, full of boxes of napkins and toothpicks.
There was a door to my left, which I slowly opened and looked out. It was a long hall and when I looked to my left again I saw Klaus Schmidt's office. So this was the room that one of Minga's goons had jumped from and grabbed me...
- Category: Crime, Murder & Mystery
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Neville Hunt 9 months ago
Ah yes, the last sentence has allowed me to recall the long corridor and the ambush. Helpful!
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Christopher 9 months ago
Thanks. I like to have Jake recap every once in a while, but try to make it seem like a natural part of the narrative. When you're reading a book it generally doesn't take a month or two to get through it like it does on here when you're only posting a certain amount on any given day.
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Neville Hunt 9 months ago
Recaps are good in this style of writing as you say and yet you weave them in so naturally! Good stuff.
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Christopher 9 months ago
Thanks, Neville.
