I got to the back and Jen Ann was in with the other girls. No broom closet rendezvous for me that night.
"Jake!" she said as she jumped up and kissed me. The other girls giggled and whispered to each other.
"Hello, ladies," I said as Jen Ann pulled me over to a couch and sat down, pulling me down with her.
"The girls want to know what you've found out, Jake," Jen Ann said.
I nodded, "All in due time, ladies. I need to catch my breath from being around such treasures of true pulchritude."
They all looked confused...
Neville Hunt 10 months ago
You old flatterer, Jake!
(The girls want to know......? fourth to last line?)
Christopher 10 months ago
Yep. Thanks, fixed it. And I call myself a good proofreader.