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Requiem For A Stripper #24

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I went into the lobby. It had a bland decor, dirty floors and an atmosphere that said This is where you wind up when life has repeatedly kicked you in the teeth.

I turned down a hall near the mailboxes and saw the janitor's closet and then a door that read Manager.

I rapped on the door a few times and heard someone yell, "I'm coming! Hold your horses!"

A man answered. He had a face like a mistake and an air of failure that hung around him like cheap aftershave. Or maybe that was cheap aftershave.

"Yeah?" he asked...

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    Neville Hunt 11 months ago

    ‘Face like a mistake’! Love it!

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    Christopher 11 months ago

    Thanks. I liked that one too.

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