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Requiem For A Stripper #3

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She had curly blonde hair that looked like a sunny day and a face that would make a man in a photograph smile. Her pink blouse looked like it was going to have to hire some extra help to contain what was underneath it. Her white pleated skirt stopped at the knees, and the sturdy legs that were showing cascaded down to a pair of pink pumps.

I just stared at her as she opened the door and stepped in. Even the fly stopped in mid-air and took a look at her.

"Are you Jake Randolph?" she asked meekly...

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    Neville Hunt 11 months ago

    I love it! Fabulous Chandleresque description. I’m salivating now... I could volunteer to be her blouse’s extra help! (a bit non-PC?... Sorry!).

    Fly stopper! More like show stopper by the sound of it!

    And that meekness sure ain’t gonna stay meek!

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    Christopher 11 months ago

    Ha! Thanks, Neville.

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