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Bourbon On The Rocks #84

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Room 4 was first so I stopped there and knocked on the door. There was a lot of commotion and voices going on inside. A man answered, sliding on a bathrobe, but not before I got a full view of his anatomy. There were three girls on the bed, all minus robes, or anything else. There were two other guys in the room and some camera equipment.

"What the hell do you want?" the man asked gruffly.

"Just a little tip, pal. The desk clerk called the vice squad."

He immediately turned red. "What? That little shit! I'll kill him!"

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    Neville Hunt almost 4 years ago

    Nice one Jake! Really enjoying this Christopher. 🙂

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    Christopher almost 4 years ago

    Thanks, Neville. I like adding a little humor and quirkiness to it without straying too far into it. As much as I love Raymond Chandler, I didn't want Jake to just be "Phillip Marlowe 2.0".

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    Neville Hunt almost 4 years ago

    Not at all... Jake's Marlowe with whistles and bells! And a GSOH.

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    Christopher almost 4 years ago

    Thanks. :)

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