Jake Randolph in "Bourbon On The Rocks" Pt. 84
Room 4 was first so I stopped there and knocked on the door. There was a lot of commotion and voices going on inside. A man answered, sliding on a bathrobe, but not before I got a full view of his anatomy. There were three girls on the bed, all minus robes, or anything else. There were two other guys in the room and some camera equipment.
"What the hell do you want?" the man asked gruffly.
"Just a little tip, pal. The desk clerk called the vice squad."
He immediately turned red. "What? That little shit! I'll kill him!"
- Category: Crime, Murder & Mystery
4 comments add one below
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Neville Hunt over 5 years ago
Nice one Jake! Really enjoying this Christopher. 🙂
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Christopher over 5 years ago
Thanks, Neville. I like adding a little humor and quirkiness to it without straying too far into it. As much as I love Raymond Chandler, I didn't want Jake to just be "Phillip Marlowe 2.0".
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Neville Hunt over 5 years ago
Not at all... Jake's Marlowe with whistles and bells! And a GSOH.
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Christopher over 5 years ago
Thanks. :)
