The door opened. There was a man standing there that I barely recognized. He looked gaunt and pale, like a bag of bones that someone had taken skin that had been soaking in a tub for a year and stretched it over a skeleton and made a pathetic human being out of it.
I pushed past him and went into the room, looking around. If he paid a dime to rent it he's due a refund of nine cents. It smelled like the monkey house at the zoo.
"Nice place you've got here, Milton. My favorite motif: early garbage dump."
Drew Martyn about 3 years ago
Love the throwaway line at the end, I'm glad Jake's comments are still part of his appeal :)
Christopher about 3 years ago
Thanks, Drew. I liked that line too.