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The Naked Beat

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Once Blaze was dressed, in black slacks and a black and white striped T-shirt, I eased open the door again. Someone had just gone into the room next door. Jade Chen was nowhere to be seen.

Blaze and I slipped down the hall quietly. The cacophony of sounds emanating from the different rooms was quite interesting: giggles, moans, squeaking bedsprings, bangs, grunts and other assorted noises.

Once we were at the end of the hall I slowly opened the door to the main room. It was completely empty. We almost made it to the door.

And I stress almost...

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    Neville Hunt almost 8 years ago

    Oh dear! How come I didn't expect them to get out that easily? Exciting :-)

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    D.M. almost 8 years ago

    so close! ('Enjoy the cliff hangers that often end your drabbles.)

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    Christopher almost 8 years ago

    Thank you all for reading and commenting.

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