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The Naked Beat

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I saw him come through the door like a bowling ball through a glass window. He was a man on a mission. I could tell he was burdened by something. He looked to be about 50, the button-down, suburban type. He looked as out of place in a Beatnik café as a goldfish stuck to a cactus.

He approached the bar, fishing in his trench coat pocket for something. I had a nostalgic twinge as I thought he was going for a gun. All my nerves tensed up.

My nerves relaxed when I saw he pulled out a photograph...

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    Neville Hunt about 8 years ago

    Now this is getting really exciting, Christopher. Goldfish stuck to a cactus...I can't get that image out of my mind! I ducked the bowling ball, just! Great stuff!

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    Christopher about 8 years ago

    Thanks, Neville! Jake's about to get into something he'll soon wish he hadn't.

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