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So this burly guy approaches me wearing a freshly pressed uniform, with a truncheon dangling from his belt. "Ooh, hon!" I said. "I'm loving the truncheon thing."
He glared at me.
I reached out and tweaked the end of his truncheon with my thumb and forefinger. "My, that's a big one," I said.
He continued glaring at me.
I ran my fingers through my hair and looked into his big, blue eyes. "Come here often?" I teased.
"Smith! Get your bloody arse in gear and follow me to the prison warden's office," he barked.
Assertive too! This one's a keeper!

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    Brandon Sutton over 3 years ago

    Ha ha! The end is hilarious, as it is hard to see it coming. Nice work!

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    Frenchie over 3 years ago

    Love it. Especially the assertive bit :)

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    Drew Martyn over 3 years ago

    Great fun, nice one!

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    Elizabeth O. Smith over 3 years ago

    Nice, really enjoyed this!

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    Bryan Thomas over 3 years ago

    Thanks, Brandon, Francine, Drew, and Olivia. :o)

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    Tony Spencer over 3 years ago

    so funny, Bryan.

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    Bryan Thomas over 3 years ago

    Cheers, Tony!

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