Storm chases itself across the sky. Crimson. Gold. Lightning so close Sierra nearly tastes it; remembers as a child licking a battery, imagines it'd taste like that.
She and Betty sit on the front porch, drinking mint juleps. Drowning thunderous rain dashing gainst the roof. Electricity sparking the air alive.
Then as quickly as it'd come, it's gone.
Continuing conversation before the storm, Grandma Betty asks.
You're a only child, aren't you?
Question hangs in still air a moment. Sierra takes a drink. Mint mingles with smoky bourbon. Sort of. I had a twin brother. He died in the womb.
Kimberly almost 9 years ago
Evocative.
D.M. almost 9 years ago
Always excited to see another of your stories emerge on the screen. Recently
saw something in the news about a woman who carried part of her dead twin inside her and had it removed. A creepy element to consider! I like how Grandma Betty asks this as the air sparks. (Check 'an only child').
Samantha Grace Bishop almost 9 years ago
I Slightly revised this. Wasn't happy with it. happier now.