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You see walls while I see someone too tame to break them down;

You sense restraint and rigidity, I comprehend fretfulness in your self-absorption;

You detect desolation, I am determined to be easily satisfied;

You gawk at solitude as profanity, while I discern loneliness in your piety;

You perceive indifference while your daftness has yet to titillate me.

I wasn't asking for your narrative; nor was I delighted to write one for you in contrast as it's hard to feel distinguished when you are only capable of discerning good vs. bad.

Creativity is not born of cold-blooded combat.

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    Brandon Sutton over 9 years ago

    Nice job with this one!

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    op ruoho over 9 years ago

    Thanks Brandon! I got sick of writing it halfway through. Best to express ideas while one's still passionate about them. Perhaps I should invest in a tape-recorder. hehe =)

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    Horrorshow over 9 years ago

    Great closing line!

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    op ruoho over 9 years ago

    Thank-you, again! =)

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