The radio beeped. She’d missed her train.
She couldn’t find it. But she always put it in the same place. She retraced her steps from last night. Went through where she’d been, what she’d worn. Tipped her bag out for a third time.
It wasn’t in the house. She’d used it last night but where was it now?
She gave up then. Went to turn the radio off and stopped dead. A train derailment. More news as it happens.
Her train.
She left the house in a daze.
And as she shut the door. Saw it there in the keyhole.
Neville Hunt almost 7 years ago
Done that...the key in door that is. Once again, Lisa, the great reveal in the final sentence that gives the clue. :-)
Lisa Williams almost 7 years ago
Thanks both xx
Jeff Taylor almost 7 years ago
Nice, "Tales of the unexpected" drabble. Very good! :D
Lisa Williams almost 7 years ago
God I loved them! Thanks Jeff X
Roger Noons almost 7 years ago
Enjoyed it, thank you.
Lisa Williams almost 7 years ago
Pleased- thanks Roger X