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She’d imagined a dusty mausoleum. But facing her, with a cloudless azure sky behind, stood a house. A central door with two upper windows either side.

A breeze blew.
Welcome in the heat.

The geraniums in the window-boxes wept their blood red tears.
The sun had long since stripped paint from the shutters, leaving wood dry and bleached. Like bones in the desert. She double checked to make sure she’d got the right place.

Yes.
Casa de los Muertos.

She knocked tentatively. Her home for the rest of that summer.

He opened the door.
And she was lost.
Forever.

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    Neville Hunt over 7 years ago

    Intriguing! Love the 'blood red tears'and the 'bones' simile. But I need to read more about this. You've left me hanging, Lisa!

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    Lisa Williams over 7 years ago

    Oh no- seems to be my week for teasing and not delivering?! Sorry. Yes- sure there's a lot more to say but not sure it'll fit into a 100 X

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