The sirens disappearing roused me as I woke up in a bed. And I tried to get up but my legs wouldn't work and I fell, and as the noise shook through the house I heard soft footsteps up the stairs.
The son opened the door. He was in his mid forties. A benevolent smile underneath the ragged mass of facial hair until he spoke and it twisted to a sneer. My own words wouldn't form. My tongue large, disobedient I'd been drugged by the monster's feral child.
"You hurt my daddy."
He smelled flowery, sweet.
It churned my insides.
Lisa Williams over 7 years ago
Ah glad you noticed- do think you can say a lot with a smell X
Lisa Williams over 7 years ago
I have 'dog nose' so tend use scent a lot in stories. Yes.
And Ha! It's always lovely to hear your thoughts Drew. Really appreciate your time xx