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Fairytales #6

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The sirens disappearing roused me as I woke up in a bed. And I tried to get up but my legs wouldn't work and I fell, and as the noise shook through the house I heard soft footsteps up the stairs.

The son opened the door. He was in his mid forties. A benevolent smile underneath the ragged mass of facial hair until he spoke and it twisted to a sneer. My own words wouldn't form. My tongue large, disobedient I'd been drugged by the monster's feral child.

"You hurt my daddy."

He smelled flowery, sweet.

It churned my insides.

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    Lisa Williams over 7 years ago

    Ah glad you noticed- do think you can say a lot with a smell X

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    Lisa Williams over 7 years ago

    I have 'dog nose' so tend use scent a lot in stories. Yes.

    And Ha! It's always lovely to hear your thoughts Drew. Really appreciate your time xx

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