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The Group #6

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Only a few hadn’t spoken.

A young girl used instagram, it seemed innocuous enough until she asked if she could take our picture. A few talked of games, candy crush and the like, how they ignored family, got takeaways so they could carry on playing.

I sat back. Not wanting to be found out.

That as they spoke I was trying to describe them in a hundred words. I wanted the confidence to say 'Do you mind if I take notes? I’m just fascinated with this. I write. I have to get new material and I’ve joined this site Drablr...'

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    Lisa Williams over 7 years ago

    Glad you enjoyed! X

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    Neville Hunt over 7 years ago

    What Drew said!!! This is so good, Lisa. I too was completely fooled until reading this last one. You really have a talent for making ordinary things in life extraordinary. Your character builds are brilliant. Love the whole series. :-)

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    Lisa Williams over 7 years ago

    Really thought you'd guess Nev after your Drabblers Anonymous comment. Lot of fun to write so glad both liked it XX

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    Neville Hunt over 7 years ago

    Well I was well and truly hoodwinked! Well done you! :-)

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