THINGS I COULD DO FOR MY BIRTHDAY
A tightrope walk across the Grand Canyon
Throw a huge Party. Many Guests. Possibly in a castle
White Water Rafting
Drive without plans in search of adventure
THINGS I WILL PROBABLY DO FOR MY BIRTHDAY
Drive to Asda in search of wine
Get a takeaway by myself
Sob in the bath
Fall asleep on sofa with unbrushed teeth
THINGS TO GOOGLE LATER
Route plan Leicester to Grand Canyon
Local Castles for hire cheaply
Research for Rafts. eBay?
If new menu up for Curry house yet
Asda multibuy wine offers
Quick guaranteed Hangover cures
Neville Hunt over 7 years ago
Love it! 'Rule of three' gives it great structure and readability. Your three section last lines are great (love the 'unbrushed teeth'!) and are important markers.
Go on, Lisa, at least try the white water rafting. My sons did and thought it brilliant! As with so many of your drabbles, there is so much more beyond the words...but the word limit guarantees the drama :-)
Lisa Williams over 7 years ago
*Adds 'Rule of three' to list of things to google later*
Thank you & obviously all completely made up(!) xX
Neville Hunt over 7 years ago
Sorry! Looking back at my comments they seem a bit like essay feedback! Glad it's made up...you had me feeling sorry for you.
Lisa Williams over 7 years ago
NO. Please- I need essay feedback type comments. So much to learn.
It's all fiction on here & am v happy soul despite penchant for dismal writing X
Lisa Williams over 7 years ago
Thanks Drew. Glad enjoyed X
Neville Hunt over 7 years ago
Re Rule of Three, Lisa, I think you probably use it automatically, by instinct!
Lisa Williams over 7 years ago
Bless you- I think I do at the biscuit tin X
Neville Hunt over 7 years ago
Haha! You're not the only one. I like the chocolate chip ones.