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Anyone for tee #1

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My first was in earnest, as it mattered right then
My hopes were instantly shattered, what a way to begin!

My second was better, or that’s just what I thought
(But if only my short game was a little less fraught).

My third was a beezer, quite the best of the year
A sweet little birdie, (not so many round here).

My fourth a disaster, too much pride I suppose
I sliced it, I lost it, but that’s how it goes.

My fifth was a beauty, she soared in the air
Great joy, one more birdie was flying right there.

3 comments add one below

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    VerityAlways over 2 years ago

    A Deja vu if I switch my drabbles with Golf ( if the theme of this drabble is Golf ). Titles epic!

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    Neville Hunt over 2 years ago

    Thanks Verity. This is a familiar tale for me!

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    Christopher over 2 years ago

    Just watch out for those sand traps!

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