Flash Fiction
Called ‘The Pan’, the owners claimed it served the best deep pan pizzas in town. Its popularity seemed to support that claim.
The man in the brown mackintosh walked in but had to wait to be seated. He seemed incongruous compared to the other diners who were cool, bejeaned youngsters, all having a fun time. He was seated, ordered his pizza, ate it and paid his bill. He stood up to leave, coughed loudly to get the other diners’ attention before pulling open his mac and exposing himself.
But he never returned. It was just a flash in The Pan.
- Category: Humor / Comedy
11 comments add one below
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Neville Hunt almost 4 years ago
Forgive me and my complete lack of modesty, but as this is my 2500th drabble I thought I’d have a laugh. And we all need a laugh right now!😆
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Jamie Clapperton almost 4 years ago
.....Flash in the Pan . Grooooooooooaaaaaaa-Hope you're bearing up well Neville.
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Neville Hunt almost 4 years ago
Doing well Jamie thanks; hope you are too. 😁
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Christopher almost 4 years ago
Congrats, Neville. 2500? Very fitting for you to celebrate such a millstone with a pun!
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Christopher almost 4 years ago
I noticed that when I slipped away two months ago I had hit 1800 and didn't even realize it.
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Neville Hunt almost 4 years ago
Well congratulations to you too Christopher. That is a measure of the quality of your work and the reason, if you needed, to continue writing and posting!🤞
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Neville Hunt almost 4 years ago
And you have Drabble of the Day today (to see it you need to logout... and there it is... Jake Randolph!... then log in again)
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Christopher almost 4 years ago
It's one of Drew's for me. One in his Roylsden series. And thanks for your support.
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Christopher almost 4 years ago
I never see those anymore. I stay logged in all the time.
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Neville Hunt almost 4 years ago
I get dislogged (if such a concept exists🤔) automatically from time to time, otherwise I wouldn’t see them either.
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Neville Hunt over 3 years ago
Sorry to hear that Drew... it must be the Pan-demic 🤔
