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Fedeltà #571


“Did you steal this diamond?” Sofia asked Paolo after he had passed it over to her and lay, spent, beside her on his bed. “Are the cops going to come knocking on my door Paolo? It’s a really cool diamond... but is it hot?”

“No worries” was Paolo’s immediate answer. “It was paid for fair and square, but the person I got it from doesn’t need it anymore. She isn’t going to want it back.”

“She?” queried Sofia.

“Couldn’t take it with her. It’s all she had left to give me!”

“Your mother?” Sofia asked. “She passed away?”

Paolo wept.

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    Drew Martyn 8 months ago

    Neville, this is (to quote my new goddess) "feckin' brilliant"! It's gone up a gear, and I really can't wait to see what happens next.

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    Neville Hunt 8 months ago

    Thank you very much Drew. You can probably tell from my manic productivity that I’m really enjoying this. 😊

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    Drew Martyn 8 months ago

    Haha yes, that's always a good sign!

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