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Fedeltà #564

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“You see, the ting is,” started Mary, “while the pigs might think it’s an open and shut case of kinky sex getting violent, it simply doesn’t add up to me. The pigs are happy that someone, anyone, has taken a cont like Ronan out and that she was his lover and luckily got killed in the process too. Neat that... too feckin’ neat! I don’t believe it! There’s more to it, so I’ve been asking around the gobshites who worked for Ronan... and, without breakin’ no Commandments as such, convinced them I was making them an offer they couldn’t refuse!”

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    Drew Martyn 8 months ago

    I came on here to read one or two, and got dragged in by Mary. Brilliantly created characterisation, Neville, she's so real, so scary and so funny. A superb idea to bring her into the proceedings :)

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    Neville Hunt 8 months ago

    Thanks very much Drew. I really appreciate your support. Mary was always a possible after the Ronan/Nicole cameo. Her foul mouth though was inspired by watching In Bruges last Sunday. She’s too interesting to let go too soon, and she might even move up the billing a bit. I’m enjoying writing her in.😊

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    Peter Henderson 8 months ago

    Great stuff.....more..more

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    Neville Hunt 8 months ago

    Thanks Peter

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