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Fedeltà #509


As Livia reached the door, a man approached from her right. He went to take her arm, first checking for her approval. He was clearly a detective assigned to accompany her to the identification of the body and subsequently make a report on the outcome. She allowed him to take her arm. She visibly flopped a little, catching the detective slightly off-guard as she let him take some of her modest weight.

Paolo watched the performance from Terry’s car. He had to admit to himself that she had put on a wonderful performance. She would be a powerful adversary.

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    Steve McBrevity about 1 year ago

    A great word picture in this sequence - film potential sans doute.

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    Neville Hunt about 1 year ago

    Thanks Steve. Sale of film rights would be very nice! 🎥

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