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Fedeltà #130

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Paolo was immediately on autopilot. His hands were everywhere. It seemed Livia had suddenly made his dreams and fantasies all come true. But Livia was still very much in control.

She pulled back. “Hey Paolo, not like this, not here, not now. If we’re going to do this, and we are... let it be the best it can. Let’s wait, let’s anticipate. Our time will come and it will be the best, but it needs to be at the best time. And that’s not now, not hurried. There are things to get in place first.”

Paolo, deflated, could only nod.

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    Drew Martyn over 1 year ago

    I thought the girls were clever, but Livia? She's on another level, I think? Brilliantly done, Neville!

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    Neville Hunt over 1 year ago

    Thanks Drew. This story is hand to mouth now. I'm living the fear :-(

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    Christopher over 1 year ago

    That's when it really gets good, Neville. God knows I've been there with ole' Jakey boy. You've got the talent and the imagination to pull it off. No worries, mate.

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    Neville Hunt over 1 year ago

    Thanks Christopher. I really appreciate you reading it and commenting.

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    Christopher over 1 year ago

    My pleasure.

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