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Fedeltà #83


"Seen enough yet?" Sofia challenged Tony.

"Not nearly enough!" Tony's gaze lifted and he looked her straight in the eyes. Having always kept herself very composed around Tony, suddenly Sofia was taken by surprise. Her challenge disintegrated. This was it. Or might be.

All she did was say nervously "I guess I look like a younger version of my sister and you must have been attracted to her once, though you don't seem to like each other now. Maybe I'm your type too."


"Unlike Marcia, I actually quite like you.”

"You're a ballsy cow, but I like you too"

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    Steve McBrevity over 6 years ago

    This is like the paperback you read on the daily commute in fits and starts, stuff in your briefcase, lose your place, can’t quite remember whose who, even the plot, re-read and off you go again! Keep at it Neville.

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    Neville Hunt over 6 years ago

    Thanks Steve. I went off the boil after I had reached the end of my forward planned section and then got very busy. But hopefully I’m back with a vengeance. 😠

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