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Fedeltà #69

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Realising that Marcia had been doing the same thing as Livia, but out in the open, Tony evened things by beating up Marcia too. Tony wasn’t going to be made a monkey of by her, so he searched and found all her contraceptive pills, flushed them away and had his way with her over and over during the week that she was ‘indisposed’.

Marcia screamed that he hemmed her in. Tony made it clear that unless she kept her mouth shut, his network was wide and deep, and she might find her style really cramped, ‘like in a car crusher!’

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    Neville Hunt over 1 year ago

    Once again, this is not a comfortable drabble, but it is pertinent to the relationship development.

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    Christopher over 1 year ago

    It's like watching a mob movie, where you know they aren't nice people and do horrible things but you're still interested in the story and what happens to these people's lives.

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    Drew Martyn over 1 year ago

    The last few drabbles are so compelling, they remind me of the scene in Goodfellas where Joe Pesci does the "why the fuck am I funny?" bit - so uncomfortable but so engrossing. :)

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    Neville Hunt over 1 year ago

    Thanks Drew. Now I’ve got to start to get creative again and work out where the hell it goes from here! 🤔

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    Drew Martyn over 1 year ago

    Excellent Neville - I think that may be part of the excitement, knowing that you and Christopher don't really know where your writing is taking you. I love writing on the edge like that, and absolutely love it when others do it.

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