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After he'd placated Terry the best he could, and kept him off the scent that he, Tony, might have been sniffing around Livia, Tony started to deal with the realisation that he too had been dragged into her deception. He was livid. He had been used by her in a way that forced him to break his code of loyalty.

He went to have a quiet word with Livia. His words were very quiet, but the beating he gave her was quite savage, avoiding at all times her pretty face. He chose a treatment that wouldn't show... on the outside.

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    Neville Hunt over 1 year ago

    I don't like writing this particular stuff, but it is important for the story and establishing the characters I am dealing with.

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    Drew Martyn over 1 year ago

    It's difficult writing stuff you're not comfortable with, isn't it? But it's true to the story and the character and you've done it well, getting the reality across without being graphic.

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    Neville Hunt over 1 year ago

    Thanks for the reassurance Drew. It doesn’t necessarily mean that Livia is down and out though...

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    Christopher over 1 year ago

    The subject matter is being handled very well, Neville.

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    Neville Hunt over 1 year ago

    Thanks Christopher.

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