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The explosion of white light filled his entire field of vision. As the light dissipated, it was gradually replaced with a field of total darkness eventually coalescing into a clearly defined image of swirling points of twinkling lights. Stars in the night sky.

As a boy, Jason dreamed of being an astronomer or an astronaut, but his grades and aptitude for science were woefully inadequate so he had chosen another career path.

The stars were abruptly replaced by a thick fog and then he heard someone counting followed by a bell clang. Suddenly he knew: the boxing match was over.

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    D.M. almost 8 years ago

    'Loved the punch of the ending! All that a good drabble does!

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    Neville Hunt almost 8 years ago

    Great stuff, Michael. You had me guessing right to the end also. Jason was really out there!

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    Michael D. Brooks almost 8 years ago

    Thanks, guys. Much appreciated. Like Jason, I'm glad you didn't see it coming. It would have ruined the ending.

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