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Slim puts on his worn t-shirt, dirty jeans and abused sneakers. He hasn’t bathed in over a week. His nickname is slim because he is big and fat. Patsy, slim’s girl, is ready to go out with him. For her a yellow blouse, matching skirt and purse, hose, 2 inch heals, and makeup. At first glance, slim starts in with the corrections. “Your skirt isn’t straight, and look their’s a pull in the hose. Scuff marks on the shoes. Everything fits like the skin on a banana. You’ve gained weight. Soon, you’ll be a pig!”. “Like you!”, Patsy thinks.

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    D.M. over 8 years ago

    The skin on the banana is perfect!

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    Neville Hunt over 8 years ago

    If I were a betting man I wouldn't put my money on this relationship lasting the course!

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