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Left. Right. Left. Right. Left. Right. Left. Right. Its not as easy as it looks. Left. Right. Right. Right. Argh. Left. Right. Left. Right. Left. Right. Left. Right. Mouth is pulled into a thoughtful grimace while he waits and reconsiders his direction. Everything seems so, out of time, out of space. Out of place. There is no itch. That’s strange. Rolling eyes. One. Two. Three. Four. Five. Six. That’s not right either. The hairs are standing up, electrified by the air; he can feel the vibration in the air hitting the follicles on his legs. That fly’s got no chance.

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    Jim M almost 6 years ago

    Love it! Very humerous and mischievous, I had no idea what was going on till the last line

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    Michael D. Brooks almost 6 years ago

    I was a little back and forth then all over the place with this one. I can't stop re-reading it.

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    Kate almost 6 years ago

    Lol thanks guys. was experimenting a bit with a riddle perspective. Will keep trying. Thanks for the comments :)

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