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When her eyes returned to the table in front of her, she felt a little sting of surprise. Her date had disappeared, leaving the white paper napkin draped across her still empty plate.

She took it and read the words he'd written:

I'm bored and tired,
I am worn out,

My throat is sore, the eyes are dry.

My patience all has now expired.
Your honesty is what I doubt.

I guess this date is just a lie.

Your eyes go constantly astray
and absent minded you reply.

But nevermind, it's quite ok.
You should have seen the other guy.

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    Iarwain Olofsson over 8 years ago

    Thanks.
    It's partly authentic. ;)

  • avatar

    Jim M over 8 years ago

    Ha, great piece. I will try this next time a date goes wrong!

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