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We met online in a sex chat room. Despite the gulf in years between us, Charlotte and I revelled in acting out our basest desires through elaborate role plays. She persuaded me to meet her and we did so in a cheap restaurant. Charlotte sat opposite me in our corner booth as we waited for drinks. She had Farrah Fawcett hair and wore huge black rimmed designer glasses. Charlotte lighted a cigarette and expelled hot, creamy, white waves of smoke into the air. By the weekend‘s end, I’d give her what she begged for most. To be in my stomach.

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    Horrorshow about 5 years ago

    Thanks for reading and commenting, Chloe. :-)

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    Michael D. Brooks about 5 years ago

    Charlotte/Harlot's web. Couldn't help thinking of one without thinking of the other. Nice imagery.

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    Horrorshow about 5 years ago

    I appreciate the positive feedback, Michael. :-)

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    Drew Martyn about 5 years ago

    Excellent, Horrorshow, I could see her clearly! Really loved the horrific humour in the last couple of sentences.

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    Horrorshow about 5 years ago

    Thank you for the kind words, Drew; I always appreciate your support.

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    Jonathan Mills about 5 years ago

    Couple of things syntax things - think it should be "Charlotte lit a cigarette" and "I'd given her what she begged for". "By the weekend's end" is a little clunky, but that's probably just me. Nice story.

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    Horrorshow about 5 years ago

    Thanks for the constructive criticism, Jonathan; much obliged. I think I'll keep my syntax as it is though.

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    Rodindeadpan about 5 years ago

    Horrorshow does it again. This is the same way I get my Meat.

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    Horrorshow about 5 years ago

    LOL! Thanks, Rodindeadpan. You're a helluva butcher! ;-)

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    Richard Charles Davidson about 5 years ago

    Nice one, horrorshow. And agree. Syntax is good as is.
    although, how much persuation did it take one wonders...

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    Horrorshow about 5 years ago

    Thank you for your continued support, Richard. I'm always grateful for your comments.

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    Elizabeth O. Smith about 5 years ago

    Ugh that was sick in all the right ways... good job!

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    Horrorshow about 5 years ago

    Glad you liked it, Elizabeth! Thanks a lot for commenting. :-)

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    Horrorshow almost 5 years ago

    Haha! I thought I'd throw in a mild one, Samantha! Thank you very much for leaving a comment. :-)

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    Bryan Thomas almost 5 years ago

    Very good! In an icky sort of way. ;o)

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    Horrorshow almost 5 years ago

    Cheers, Bryan! :-)

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    Horrorshow almost 5 years ago

    Thank you so much for reading and commenting, nekokirin3104! :-)

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