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I was lost in Barcelona, on a dark cold night.. Desperately fumbling in my bag for the hotel card, I didn't notice three very odd youths observing me.
The youths stopped in front of me. The one that looked like their leader said: ''Madam, can we help you?''
I had no choice but to trust these unusual guides. Strangely enough, I didn't feel fear. True to their word, they brought me to my hotel.
I bowed to them in gratitude. Before entering the foyer, I turned around to see them disappear in the night. Three unicorns as white as snow.

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    Frenchie over 2 years ago

    This little drabble is one of my English assignments (yep, it is about time I learned the basic of English grammar, lol...) where I had to write between 50 and 100 words covering one fact and three elements of fiction. So, I thought, might as well make it a drabble.

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    Neville Hunt over 2 years ago

    Terrific Frenchie. I realise that the unicorns must be true, but could the leader youth really speak English?🙂

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    Christopher over 2 years ago

    Great drabble, Frenchie. Glad to see you back.

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    Drew Martyn over 2 years ago

    Yep, great to see you back Frenchie :) and with such a magical drabble, nice one.

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    Jamie Clapperton over 2 years ago

    The unicorns at the end were a nice surprise Frenchie :-)

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