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''I didn't mean to hurt you,'' he said
Not meaning it but a tear he shed
For a little dramatic show,
You know...
The moment of choice had come.
To forgive him was the way ahead.
She told him so, bowed her head
Turned to go the way she had come.
He stood there, not understanding
She didn't fall for his little scheming
'But you just said you'll forgive
How can you leave?''
She just shrugged and carried on.
He waited until she was totally gone.
''Bitch'' he muttered, looking on his screen
Undecided whether to text Lisa or Aileen.

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    Neville Hunt over 7 years ago

    Very good. You've captured his rattiness really well and it's pleasing that she makes the right decision. Watch out Lisa or Aileen! Very enjoyable.

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    Michael D. Brooks over 7 years ago

    I think he understood very well. The little prick. Karma is the real bitch here.

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    Frenchie over 7 years ago

    hehehehe... thank you my friends

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