Is This What You're Looking Fo-Boom!
'So cold. How may more of these-'
'-We're about half way up. Take a breather?
'Wouldn't get up again. I'll be alright. Anyway. Not about me.'
'No. Nip of brandy?'
'Worse than sitting down. Thanks. What a place to hang .. Is that..?'
'I think so.'
'Eyes saying it had better be up there.'
'Correctly'
'If it isn't. Oh. We're here.'
'Nothing else is.'
'So.. '
'So we go back down, and up the next tower, and then the next, if need be.'
'I...Don't know if I can take this.'
'As you say. Not about you.'
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- Category: Psychological
9 comments add one below
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Neville Hunt over 2 years ago
Interesting, Jamie. What I’m looking for is... understanding... but a nip of brandy wouldn’t go amiss either!
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Frenchie over 2 years ago
Frodo and Sam? But what are we looking for? Thank you for a refreshing drablr, Jamie... 😊 (Pun intended,LOL)
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Jamie Clapperton over 2 years ago
Truthfully Neville I don't know who they are or what they're doing up wherever it is. Just playing with dialogue only drabbling. :-)
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Jamie Clapperton over 2 years ago
Actually Frenchie I've never read or seen The Lord Of The Rings! ;-)) Not sure what they're looking for and we could be in danger from the one offering the brandy if we knew.... ;-)
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Neville Hunt over 2 years ago
Thanks Jamie... and why not! And responding to your comment to Frenchie, you are not alone. I have never read a single Lord of the Rings book or watched any part of an LotR movie, and, shock horror, the same goes for Harry Potter, even though I saw Hazza’s sidekick Ron Weasley at Midnight Mass one Christmas in the next village because he has a mansion there (where his folks now live).
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Frenchie over 2 years ago
I love the Lord of the Rings, thebook, not the film. THe film is definitely not faithful to the book, unlike Harry Potter.
I love that drabble too... :-D I wonder if a film can be made from just a 100 words? -
Brian Mackinney over 2 years ago
Oh dear, I’ve not read Lord ot the Rings. Too many words.
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VerityAlways over 2 years ago
Nice one, Jamie! I like the fact that you gave the readers a little homework ;-))
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Christopher about 2 years ago
Nice idea for a drabble, dialogue only. I might try my hand at this sometime.
