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Nothing has went right for years now, ever since that accident.
It's not just that I'm unlucky, it's like the worlds forcing me to break free from reality. I hear voices calling my name. Light sobbing, in the middle of the night. I feel pins and needles so severe it's as if a needle is physically piercing my skin. The worst thing is, sometimes, I can feel hands, clasping mine.

I look to my phone only to read the most terrifying message I've ever seen; "If you can see this you need to wake up! Please baby! Just wake up!"

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    Drew Martyn over 4 years ago

    Omfg!

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    Drew Martyn over 4 years ago

    Reading this on the bus on my way home from work and I felt - I dont know how I felt! Chilled, shocked, actual fear for a second! This is amazing, it has everything, even a backstory. Really got to me, I cant rate this highly enough, brilliant!

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    Ricky Moore over 4 years ago

    Thanks Drew I appreciate it! Hope I didn't scare you too much! Haha :)

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    Christopher over 4 years ago

    Wow, Ricky. Incredible.

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    Ricky Moore over 4 years ago

    Thanks Christopher! :)

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    Neville Hunt over 4 years ago

    Really scary, Ricky.

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    Drew Martyn over 4 years ago

    You can scare me as much as you want, I love it :)

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