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Prone, dress rucked up around her waist, knickers around her left ankle, her bum raised, allowing access to his forearm as he encouraged her enjoyment to match his.
Their shared heat driven by that within her, he increased his tempo.
She turned her face to one side. They kissed. Their mouths muffled their combined, urgent efforts.
As he felt her spasms he froze, locked deep.
She felt his gasp suck the breath from her mouth as he pulsed.
Panting, they looked to the stunned salesman holding the 'Try me for comfort.' sign recently moved off the bed.
'We'll take it.'

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    shaun almost 8 years ago

    Yes. Yes. Definitely memory. Not imagination. Thanks Drew.

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    Neville Hunt almost 8 years ago

    Yes, it's a great drabble that took me by surprise at the end. To concentrate on the semi-serious though, it's performance under more extreme conditions that is the true bed differentiator.

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    shaun almost 8 years ago

    I really feel that warrants further explanation. Go on!

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    Neville Hunt almost 8 years ago

    Well...so long as it's comfortable enough to allow you to get to sleep, then, since you're unconscious, then that's all it needs to do. On the other hand, if, as most
    people do, you plan to use it for conscious, wide awake and energetic activities, then it's important that it's thoroughly tested before you buy...because they're not cheap. If I were you, Shaun, I'd go on a testfest next time you want a replacement.

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    shaun almost 8 years ago

    Never ignore free advice, that's what I always say.

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