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How much time would it take, she often countered. She had left eight years ago. She wanted to see them, wanted them to see her three year old daughter, wanted them to see her happiness, to know that it was possible,
that she was proof. Here in the heart of her childhood she gave gifts to her
in-laws, hoping her brothers might come, wanting to welcome them like rain
after the earth was parched and cracked. When they broke through the door
with their fists, she rose with their names, and the names with them, splashed with gasoline, consumed.

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    Neville Hunt about 8 years ago

    Oooh, that's awful (the situation, not the drabble!). It's very hard to believe this 'honour' thing with some Asian families, although my wife worked with an Asian woman who was effectively 'on the run' from her family of marriage, permanently anxious lest they discover her whereabouts. Difficult topic very well articulated.

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    D.M. about 8 years ago

    Thank you, Neville. What we take for granted, others wish for.

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    frostygossamer about 8 years ago

    So sad. 'Honour' before 'family' is so wrong. Very nicely evoked.

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