Alan traced his finger lovingly along Samantha's hairline. He followed the line of her nose, hesitating for a moment before continuing over her full lips. He then ran his finger over her left cheek with his delicate, surgeon's touch. He was precise, almost mechanical, until his actions gave way to a shiver, sexual in its nature, which ran throughout the length of his body as he recalled the deed with vivid clarity.
He returned the pillow that he had smothered Samantha with to the cupboard. It sat alongside another four pillows. Soon, Alan would add another pillow to his collection.
Tony Spencer almost 10 years ago
Just enough detachment to make this piece deliciously diabolical.
Brandon Sutton almost 10 years ago
The actions and feelings of Alan seem so intimate, it is a horrific surprise to hear at the end what is actually going on. Nice drabble!
Bryan Thomas almost 10 years ago
Many thanks, Drew, Tony and Brandon. :o)
Horrorshow almost 10 years ago
I think this is my favourite of all your drabbles so far, Bryan.
Bryan Thomas almost 10 years ago
Thanks!