"The forgotten deer" drabbles by Che bk201

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Eyes of Heaven and Hell

The forgotten deer #3

They say that when you look into the eyes , you see the abyss , the purgatory invites you and the angels scream :" Run ! Thou hast none here ! And Run towards the forgotten deer!"
He remembered this story when he saw the eye-shaped rooks.
Suddenly ,he found himself surrounded by Lava. It was no ordinary Lava , it emits no heat but instead you can hear screams of creatures crying for help , begging for mercy.

Confused as he is , he thought that maybe he could walk through.
He didn't know, Move and you're dead.

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Dreams are not unreal

The forgotten deer #2

He neared the tree and there was nothing to be seen but grains of sand dancing to the wind.
He almost went back to Almonia but then he, somehow, recalled a vision he has seen when he was in his mother's womb. A deer, a cave, a crow and a cup in fire.
" There has to be something here, it could be dangerous but i will look into it"
He managed to climb a hill to see the surrounding area clearly and what a founding!
There were two giant rocks shaped as eyes.
" The myth is true !"

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The beginning

The forgotten deer

Even though the wind takes dreams away when it is not raining, the ice could freeze emotions and the sun wouldn't ever burn the scars to seal them away ,
He found a path in his honest words engraved in the soul of a forgotten deer that wondered around for eternity.

The journey started in the great desert of Almonia , a land of sand and heat.
Amidst all the palmtrees he saw , there was one beneath a great fall and a bird showed him the way.
Arrived at night , a dream has passed and a story begun.