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Stacy stands on the side of a bridge. She flings herself off.

Earlier that day, Stacy sat in her house, in her nicest dress.

Later that day, Stacy wandered the streets after drinking too much.

Earlier that day, Stacy made plans with a nice guy named Devin.

Later that day, Stacy was flying through the air towards deadly water.

Earlier that day, Stacy's best friend, Kristie, talking about her husband Devin.

Later that day, Kristie called Stacy, and Stacy was left in tears.

Later that day, Stacy went to a bar.

At the end, Stacy hit the water, dying instantly.

4 comments add one below

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    Drew Martyn about 7 years ago

    Love the way it goes backwards and forwards, great drabble

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    Horrorshow about 7 years ago

    I really like how you've constructed this, Brandon. Another vote from me.

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    Tony Spencer about 7 years ago

    nicely put together

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    Brandon Sutton about 7 years ago

    Thanks to all three of you for the comments!

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