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He had wandered the vast expanse for what seemed like months. It couldn't have been more than a few days, but Tero felt so weak he didn't care.

His horse had died, saving him.
His friend had died, joining him.
His wife had died, loving him.
But his work would be rewarded, and they would all be back.

He had already destroyed every shrine, absorbed every bit of darkness, and as he entered the temple again he felt his legs buckling and his vision blurring. Tero knew his death was coming fast, and hoped that Satan would keep his promises.

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    Brandon Sutton almost 10 years ago

    Thank you!

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    Horrorshow almost 10 years ago

    Intriguing. I like it. :-)

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    Brandon Sutton almost 10 years ago

    Thanks!

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    Kimberly almost 10 years ago

    This was comical....I laughed. I think you should reconsider rewriting your profile of yourself. Do not degrade your own work before someone else reads it...and by now you are either a writer earning a degree or you are a student who writes.

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    Brandon Sutton almost 10 years ago

    Thanks for the comment and the advice! I'll make the changes right away.

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