Kevin is running down the streets, as fast as he possibly can. Running across the road, Kevin narrowly misses a car from not paying attention. Soon, Kevin arrives at the subway, and starts looking franticly around him for her. He blasts through gateways despite being told to stop, since he does not care if he gets into trouble later, so long as he finds that woman now. He runs further to where the train will soon stop when he sees her. Kevin runs to her and says, “Here, I found your phone. You must have left it at my house.”
Frenchie almost 5 years ago
Nice, feel a bit breathless now... but one tiny question, is it where you want your full stop here ? '..the train will soon stop when he sees her. Kevin runs to her and says..'. Nice drabble in any case :-)
Brandon Sutton almost 5 years ago
Thank you for the comment, and for the complement. I feel like it is the details like the one you point out which are really the main part I can improve upon as a writer.