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Final Castle #20

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James was a slim reed of a man with a bohemian shock of dark hair punctuated with fine braids above a crooked nose. He carried with him a sense of peace. Of the willfully passive.

Brother James studied the rubble within the monastery courtyard. The damage couldn't be undone and could not be rectified. They would have to leave behind this ill sanctuary.

He calculated silently. The metal intestines of this Cityship? The mountains?

Kate drifted silently behind him, touched his shoulder. "Brother, we need to leave. NOW"

Crackling static above the chapel announced the Grypyn XVII returning. To finish.

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    Jim M over 9 years ago

    Thank you mate

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    Rodindeadpan over 9 years ago

    Welcome Vic

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    Rodindeadpan over 9 years ago

    I'm confused by the Final Castle series Jim M and Vic

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    Vic Raines over 9 years ago

    Hey Rodindeadpan, the premise is that it's a story built of drabble but mixed up so you learn events in a disjointed order. I've started to flesh out characters and settings to build the world. Keep reading, I hope it starts to make sense soon

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    Jim M over 9 years ago

    Grypyn XVII's are truly awesome Vic, really impressed

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